Thy sword thy shild shay ride into war with my wive at home I ride further and further.And with my sword and shild I ride in to war,swinging my with enemy’s blood all over it and with thy sword (with blood on)and with shild(with arrows on) I continued fighting.
Thy sword and thy shild I stay strong and brave fighting continually until we win the war.

November 24, 2015 at 9:24 am
Some very dramatic imagery is used here, Rhys. You should start a new line at regular intervals when writing poetry.